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6/8/2017 1:29:44 PM

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I WILL RISE AGAIN

Why ?
Why the world is staring at me ?
Always leaving me alone and saying you can’t. Why?
They said that I can’t be like others, but why?
If I try to peep the world they say that I am flippant
Dying soul I am Fading soul I am
I can’t depict how I feel but irksome people they are
Saying that I am destined to be a servant
Don’t the know I have Dreams?
Of course ! they are numb scary goblins
Why they think I am pierrot ?
I have my own dreams servant is not my dream nor my faith
Let this chains of fire broke! Let me free!
Let my wings be born let me fly! High in the blue sky
Cruel the world is always being cruel to me
Don’t the know the earth they live is a woman too..
Mother Nature she is
Oh! I forgot She is no more ..
She was killed by her own children
Just like me fading soul she is
Oh The Curse of world ! listen to us bungle fate is not ours
The eerie day is not far away
Your bloods will fall and I will laugh!
In that sea of dark like a light from heaven
I will rise again!
edited by Devalekshmi.D on 6/8/2017
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