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3/29/2017 6:04:28 PM

Kathryn Bennett
Posts: 1 		I struggle with this because the internal and end-line rhymes seem pretty forced. The exclamation points are also challenging.
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4/21/2017 12:47:03 PM

Doug Vinson
Posts: 102 		This one loses me right away. "I have a box and that’s for a fact-from which an act is being lead.""Lead"? Being led, or being read?
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