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1/26/2017 10:58:30 AM Seth Diamond Posts: 17	What do you think of the grammar in this poem? Is it too short? /poem/empty_spaces_868503 thx
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2/2/2017 10:56:11 PM Dave McGahan Posts: 5	seth181818 wrote: What do you think of the grammar in this poem? Is it too short? /poem/empty_spaces_868503 thx since I know nothing of grammar - it's an exclusive crowd I know, I think it's not something that matters and still something that does not matter in any way at all. how's that for a sentence?
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2/2/2017 10:58:53 PM Dave McGahan Posts: 5	I am about to try to submit a poem for an odd reason you know poetry can be odd for reasons unknown
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2/2/2017 11:01:08 PM Dave McGahan Posts: 5	does anyone lose them self in poetry, or does anyone find themselves in poetry, or possibly both?
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2/24/2017 6:49:33 PM Doug Vinson Posts: 102	Seth, let us read the poem.... Give us a link that works. Or just post the poem.
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2/28/2017 9:10:42 PM J. Amorose Posts: 19	Found it for him! Empty Spaces I would, to satisfy my love for you - fill your empty spaces. To show your wonder, all the prose there is. To fill your wounds with health. Your passions abated.
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4/15/2017 1:22:17 AM Doug Vinson Posts: 102	Dave, not bad, but it's very simple and only 8 lines long. My opinion - put more into it.
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