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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
1/7/2017 12:45:53 AM

Doug Vinson
Posts: 102
'Free Verse,' Greg, or 'Prose Poetry.' As you said, "This poem is whatever you find it to be." The poet's vision rarely totally intersects with that of the reader, making "criticism" a hard thing to do, unless it's with respect to more concrete elements - rhyme, meter, tone, etc. Nice personification and the many mentions of things.
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1/8/2017 4:10:39 PM

Gregory Richard Barden
Posts: 23
Thank you very much, Doug - your opinion is highly considered, and greatly appreciated! I'm new to both poetry AND The Soup, so still trying to navigate, and any kind of road map is greatly welcomed.
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