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3/31/2011 10:36:29 AM
dave archuletta Posts: 10
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With a simple act of tracing my face She had knighted my soul
Sustained - by the given of innocence and grace
With a fingertip placed on my forehead like a sword set on point Life promises inferred I then assured We would both share together in acquaint edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011 edited by Dave Archuletta on 3/31/2011
-- David Archuletta
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4/1/2011 6:39:03 AM
Manouchka doreus Posts: 23
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make sure that your using the words in contxt.... i understand the last line but wld th nxt guy
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