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10/3/2016 10:27:40 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Energy of Diction - by - Bob Atkinson spell me here for a moment this thought of words displayed gives me some room to think aloud about my use of communication do I try hard to distinguish thoughts with character of verbs and nouns or do I use an easy way to talk not erudite nor profound or do I use a level path which gains or drops not as I spend my time, no sympathy head not fully canted watch me speak with pomposity that trend which sells my soul for ego driven ecstasy to comfort me when old forced, in a quiet time to blend my thoughts with words I keep those conflicts to a minimum and shun poetic verve I cannot seem to believe we have no feelings left which don't apply to our lives or seek to bring out our best bring our best to a page where another can deduce we've gone not overboard with lies and other common abuses so please find me distracted when I choose those simple words in speech which describe my feelings on a subject private and discreet for I've been given a hand of cards I don't fully understand yet someday, with effort I may find some words with which to plan plan an option for my duty to settle differences by deduction that worn out tool which we don't use when we declare abstractions as we prefer to glare with eyes not concerned with common good unfocused on our blindness to our purpose in this world ******* ***** ******* google: poetry critic
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10/17/2016 1:20:37 PM Graphite Drug Posts: 81	Excellent work Bob. I like this best of all your work I have read. It has an interesting contradictive character, desiring simple language,yet being complex and poetic.
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