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8/28/2016 4:08:16 PM
Gail Lewis
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Seeking Me
So the dices are rolled
The brave and the bold
What shall ye beA story untold?
A joke
A legend
A hero
A warrior
All possible within one life?
Maybe a Mother Maybe a Wife?
How far will you travel to be!
Will you find your inner me....
Strive to be the best in your family!
Maybe you will get it eventually?
How is enlightenment ever found....?
You lookYou seekYour honor bound!?
Oh tales you can hear if you listen
If you don't you will definitely miss them?
Yes dear oneI'ts the ultimate point of the mission....
What wisdom lies in another!
Yet always Follow your soul
Avoid the paths and many pot holes
Now i honor you Mother!
edited by Gailofbards on 9/1/2016
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