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3/18/2011 7:04:13 AM
Manouchka doreus
Posts: 23
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A beatiful cause destroys everything.
Forget.
growth.
hate.
innocence, just known, lost.
more,
new
ostracised.
people, quarantined, rejected severely.
torn
unimportant
vacant
with xenophobic zealocy.
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