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5/10/2016 11:52:18 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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The silence does sing
To the emptiness it will bring
A darkness to the void
To fill the nothingness that cannot be enjoyed
edited by Gabe on 5/10/2016
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5/11/2016 8:16:37 AM
Jolene Cheyney
Posts: 66
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Please do not let sorrow overtake you
God made each day start brand new
My name is Jolene but most people call me Jo
It's been that way for as long as I know
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6/7/2016 1:50:03 PM
Graphite Drug
Posts: 81
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I caught two people writing rhyme
and I had a bit of time
so I rattled away at the keys
to see if I could please.
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