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5/10/2016 11:40:35 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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If Life strikes you not--
To cut you in that Fated way--
And you linger till not even an enemy be--
Know then the pain of loneliness
edited by Gabe on 5/10/2016
edited by Gabe on 5/17/2016
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