Poetry Forum
4/8/2016 3:40:54 AM
Jemilla Hibonne
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i like this. because i can relate to it. :-)
more punctuations would be great as well as separating your stanzas from when you switch from talking about you to talking about him.
there's some powerful words in your poem which i like personally but the word "normal" pales in comparison to the others.
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