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2/17/2016 8:23:41 PM

Bob Atkinson
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To Know The Times


-by Bob Atkinson


how can we here in our times
come to know good truth

how can we watch with open eyes

what seems here so uncouth




how can we wonder where we're going

where will we find an end

to this turmoil flowing over

our heads when stuck in sand




do we look to future outcomes

or do we look back to

those same situations rendered

by folks who status knew




status of an epic time

when struggles began again

forced by staunch will of man

and their wish to kill again




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