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12/30/2015 12:20:56 AM
Gabe Shelly
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What is it like in that moment before the end--
When the abyss stares at you through and through--
I'd think you'd not know--
For Time makes no sound when the sickle reaps
To hear the sickle reap
edited by Gabe on 12/30/2015
edited by Gabe on 12/30/2015
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12/30/2015 1:04:44 PM
Terry Robinson
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Short, sharp and very good
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