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2/21/2011 1:40:29 AM
Ammu Yo
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I am standing alone, could feel my soul is dying,
Dont know whether to Burry or Burn???
Or! Do I have a chance to make it alive,
Don't know how to try also!!
Or leave it just as it's leaving!!!
Oh My God!!! Oh My Love!!! Help Me!!! Come Back to Me!!!
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