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2/20/2011 11:59:28 AM M Nudelman Posts: 3	Snowflake Snowflake Unique, Vulnerable Isolated Within Condition Exceptional, Innocent, Unparalleled, Perplexing Autism
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3/21/2011 8:53:18 AM Cherie Durbin Posts: 6	Autism deeply affects many lives, as you have so eloquently shown in this poem. I think it is a very isolating condition, both for the sufferer and his family.
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3/21/2011 12:17:48 PM Aron Jacob Posts: 12	What a unique and powerful metaphor. Well done!
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3/21/2011 4:15:29 PM Lucas Williams Posts: 10	This is a crystalline example of desolation introversly i appluad your work for its simplicity
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3/23/2011 6:24:45 PM RAQUEL p Posts: 12	So simple yet such truth behind thee words. It is beautifully written
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