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3/8/2015 5:01:28 PM
Edmund Linton Posts: 14
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I watched --
dandelions waltz with tips of yellow grain blowing kisses to the hum of a dragon fly, rays of sun sprinkling their goodbyes on darkening pond.
An amber glaze of misting dew settled on this scene divine, where past and present, future rhyme, to find a place outside of time.
As a cricket finely tuned his bow, to a ribbon of cloud blushing over the rising crescent moon, an evening stroke of the master’s brush paused, as if to share this magic dusk.
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