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2/2/2015 10:05:17 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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A hot mess in a tight dress--
Looking as mean as Norma Jean--
Eat you alive.
With a glance she'll kill--
Date nothing less than man in Mattell--
Kindness from her, you'll never tell
1/21/'15
edited by Gabe on 2/2/2015
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