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3/16/2015 7:55:09 PM
Graphite Drug
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The Pickup Truck
Last two stanzas are confusing. Is somebody making fun of pickup truck because it is impractical and uses too much gas? Green solar shields sound like envy and have no clue about bulky wheels. Could these two stanzas be written more clearly?
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