Poetry Forum
12/16/2014 1:02:38 PM
Bob Atkinson
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Justin, an amazing poem, full of purpose. Love it, a classic, (but, as always, rewrite to dump the many "is")
Regards, Bob
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12/22/2014 5:33:08 PM
Graphite Drug
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There is a good flow to your writing, not much to gripe about here. Other than this work seems common, "Poetry is. . ." Many people seem to write about what poetry is. The end is a bit clunky. It contradicts your philosophy, you love her, but complain about her ignorance.
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