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12/3/2014 10:30:34 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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Lady,
The Silence of your Beauty is deafening-- Every moment that I breathe, every breath...is for you. And though bittersweet is the pain that you are not with me At least it is for me to keep
11/20/'14 edited by Gabe on 12/3/2014
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