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11/24/2014 6:30:49 PM
Joel Thornton
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The rhyme scheme loses momentum in the 6th stanza.. I think just changing that last line of the sixth to rhyme with the scheme you established in the previous stanza's would dramatically improve to cohesive flow of the entire piece ~Joel
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