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11/20/2014 7:01:10 AM
Jacob Frey
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Once my love, was a timeWhen I could quote line for lineThe lyric of our loveStill this day I think of youBeautiful SkyThe baby blue, red, and orange huesLeaves of autumn Come another dayYou remind me of yesterdayThis lyric of loveWe brought to lifeWith smiles, laughter, and happy eyesPleasant AvenueRun away againTo the hills, and into Beautiful Sky
edited by brokenwingedangel on 11/20/2014
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