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1/21/2011 7:15:33 PM
Diamond Poetry Posts: 3
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Come crying to me when you are weak
Come running to me and i'll be slow to speak
Dont be afraid or fall apart
You know that I love you and I'l protect your heart
Remain calm at this hard time
after the storm the rainbow will surely shine
I need some time to regain my strength
and see if its possible to forget
the way you loved me
how you made me see
How wonderful and beautiful
I could possibly be
Your love touched my heart like a burning fire
It gave me these strong feelings and a sense of desire
To show you what is within
deep down beneath my skin
I want you to be proud of me
and show you all that I can be
You inspired me and showed me the way
I just want you back in my arms today
To see your smile
that lights up my life
and dance with you in the middle of a winters night
Is it possible to forget?
and not wind up with any regret?
I know this love is true
I just want to see if I mean anything to you
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