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1/21/2011 7:15:33 PM

Diamond Poetry
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Come crying to me when you are weak

Come running to me and i'll be slow to speak

Dont be afraid or fall apart

You know that I love you and I'l protect your heart

Remain calm at this hard time

after the storm the rainbow will surely shine

I need some time to regain my strength

and see if its possible to forget

the way you loved me

how you made me see

How wonderful and beautiful

I could possibly be

Your love touched my heart like a burning fire

It gave me these strong feelings and a sense of desire

To show you what is within

deep down beneath my skin

I want you to be proud of me

and show you all that I can be

You inspired me and showed me the way

I just want you back in my arms today

To see your smile

that lights up my life

and dance with you in the middle of a winters night

Is it possible to forget?

and not wind up with any regret?

I know this love is true

I just want to see if I mean anything to you

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