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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
1/16/2011 2:25:44 PM

Trudy Schrader
Posts: 3
Words
Ascending, Condescending, Apprehending
Building up, Tearing down, holding on
Creating, Destroying, Capturing
Relationships

Statements
Standing, Falling, Binding
Pulling up, Pushing down, Putting on
Inventing, Relenting, Preventing
Intimacy

Stories
Erecting, Dissecting, Connecting
Rooting up, Cutting down, Latching on
Originating, Imitating, Eliminating
Realities


Written by Trudy Schrader
edited by legend on 1/16/2011
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