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Forum Home » High Critique » ABC form, please critique

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1/7/2011 4:50:19 AM

Eiken Laan
Posts: 10
An apprehensive Amy
Births baby Bob
Carefully cradles cries
Dons dry diapers
Emanates endless emotions
Fraught frantic fears
Grateful glad greetings
Huge happy hugs
Innate intuition increases
Joyful jaded journey
Key kind kin
Learner loving lavished
Must make money
Nurturing new needs
Oceans of options
Play pray plan
Quiet questioning queries
Restful rescue remedies
Seeking soother solutions
Truly tired times
Uncertain, unforgettable unity
Varied viral visits
Warm winter woollens
Xylophones xeroderma, x-ray
Yesterday youthful years
Zestful zoned zoo
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2/20/2011 1:22:23 PM

Mackenzie Bush
Posts: 2
Very nice, Have never seen this type of poem before. I like it. Congrats on your baby I presume.
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