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12/23/2010 9:45:20 AM

Aimee Garside
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When you need me I will be there,
To hold you in my arms and help you cope with this despair.
You might feel alone at times,
Abandoned, lost, unloved, or that life’s simply not fair.
But all you need to know is that I am always there.
For you in your darkest hour can rely on me,
To engulf you with love and save you from any misery.
If you ever feel like life’s too hard and you want to give up and cry,
Just remember that,
The world would be nothing without a guy,
Strong willed and kind hearted just like you,
Who could be anything in this world even The President too.
I need to you realise that it doesn’t matter what happens in life, you will succeed.
All you need is to see what I see.
Have faith in yourself and you will go far,
This life you lead will pave the path to greatness, riches and the stars.
That even surpasses what I think you will achieve,
Because you are truly wonderful and the most perfect guy to me.

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