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12/21/2010 9:02:47 AM

Aimee Garside
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I sit there waiting to hear the ding, you arrive sending my heart in a spring.
We chat and banter, all night till the sun beckons and dances.
Is this really love, am I falling for someone that started out as a silly Internet crush?
The feelings I feel must be real because my whole body is engulfed with your entire being.
We typed, we talked, we laughed, we fought, but at the end of every night I was always yours.
I hate you, you hate me, you tell me to shut up that would never be.
Everyone would laugh and giggle at our banter, it would look to them as if we weren’t together.
But in our hearts and minds we were always intertwined, within our love that made and defined this new stage in our lives.
The phone would ring, “hey babe” would be said and that one line would be enough to make me turn red.
Your voice it sings to me, I just wish you would understand how much you mean to me.
I shiver all over and go giddy on the phone, it’s like you have me in your time zone.
It only ever happens with you, I swear this is true.
You must have some power over me because I’m never usually this “blue”.
The wink and look you give on cam, sends me in a flutter I try not to mutter the words that I think...........I love you Manuel to the edge of the world and the brink.
There may be so much space between us right now, but not for long babe, you will be mine.
I know this is strange to some people but it’s true I found love on IMVU and it was with you.

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