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8/23/2014 8:36:06 AM
Louis Muhereza Posts: 3
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Secretly treading on the wrong path I'm afraid of my of my own shadow Chasing me down the lane Disappointed by my own self and reaking of fear within Even my breath stinks of fear The unknown and the future all unclear You don't who trust and who to blame You are just there.
Louis muhereza
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