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8/4/2014 7:39:07 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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I have cut a Simril-- From the darkened grounds of Terra I made it... Chipping away at the coal-block, Picking till red my nails became, With hammer and chisel striking. And if my aim was true A light would shine through, a silvery hue-- Iluvator's Beauty...
Many to it have I shown-- I even presented it to my Lords and Nobles Way back when, But never did I see it again
My Script Tolkien 8/2/'14 edited by Gabe on 8/4/2014 edited by Gabe on 8/4/2014
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