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3/24/2014 7:32:10 AM

kareem omoboriowo
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Thy beauty reflets from within
Thy body tempts a saint in sin
Skin as soft and tender as silk
Thy breast is rich in flesh and milk

Thy crystal clear heart is love-filled,
blessed with greens like Eden field
Thy spoken words is a bold brass
Smooth but rare is a treasure glass

I plead to be lured by thy glares,
for thy eyes are two gleaming
pearls
Thy mild embrace is a walm toast
Thy pleasure night I desire most

To long live in my illusion,
fill my throat with thy love portion
As sincere as an infant weep;
Love is blue as the ocean deep
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