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3/11/2014 12:06:08 AM
Gabe Shelly
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My Dear King,
Has time been good to you?
Do the snows of the winter-man make you think 'What could have been',
When you slew my brother did you think of us...
Your God-- your Father-- is not mine,
But did you not break His laws?
So why should you be sung on high when you should burn down low
3/7/'14
edited by Gabe on 3/11/2014
edited by Gabe on 3/11/2014
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