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10/24/2010 8:48:08 PM

My feelings for Mary Jane, is it love or lust?
I ask myself that question every time i bust.
Its a must, so in Mary Jane i trust.
Sit back and relax no need to adjust.
She express colors far beyond others.
Just a one night of fun turn into another.
Now I'm thinking what if she was my baby's mother?
Fantasies of her only linger and turn into smother.
It feels good to be hitting her all night.
Once or twice a day will do, if she's alright.
Some days she is loose and others tight.
It Doesn't matter cuz she got me feeling higher than a kite
She be tricking me, and teasing me.
Looking smoking hot as she burns just pleases me.
I whisper in her ear, its you and I until infinity.
She smiles and tells me don't you ever finish me.
When i awake she is gone leaving me in pain.
But I'll see her again soon when i hit up my main mane.
The missing presence of her at times drives me insane.
A note on the floor it read I'll be back next week, Love promiscuous Mary Jane.
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10/29/2010 3:37:40 PM

anthony beesley
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lost in love in the heat of her high...smoke screams from her volcano in the middle of her thighs...sweet mary jane how could something so wrong feel so right?

anthony beesley
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