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10/19/2010 10:59:23 AM

valeria iliadou
Posts: 13
Your voice was born from twilight's


Your name stole the mystery

of the night.

Ambrosial hand of gold

bowled along the white


to glorify the lost souls

of a time

winding off with each chord

the locked secrets of the world.


The Sun has chosen you

and the Sirens are trying

to steal a song.

Time is trembling among

melodies and laments.

A lost lover behind the

burning light.

Your silence is calling

the Muses

to carry you beneath

the sky's festival.

Now you are near her

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10/23/2010 9:36:09 PM

Audra Carson
Posts: 4
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