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10/19/2010 10:59:23 AM
valeria iliadou
Posts: 13
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Your voice was born from twilight's
breast.
Your name stole the mystery
of the night.
Ambrosial hand of gold
bowled along the white
surf
to glorify the lost souls
of a time
winding off with each chord
the locked secrets of the world.
Orpheus!
The Sun has chosen you
and the Sirens are trying
to steal a song.
Time is trembling among
melodies and laments.
A lost lover behind the
burning light.
Your silence is calling
the Muses
to carry you beneath
the sky's festival.
Now you are near her
again.
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10/23/2010 9:36:09 PM
Audra Carson
Posts: 4
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Hello
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