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10/13/2010 5:21:38 PM

valeria iliadou
Posts: 13

This is my new poem.. I hope you understand the feelings in it. I know that those who travel in fields of loss and love, of memories and hopes, of sorrows and light, will understand.

THE NIGHTS FROM SO ON

The nights..The nights from so on:
I lay down to sleep and my mind flies.
I watch dreams-movies leading
your hug and your laughter.
Our love too is now in plural.
They are the defenceless loves.
How could you let our one
die left and betrayed?
I am a person
gender female.
I own a heart
gender not female nor male.
Gender empty.
My empty heart.
Loved you.
edited by val_ilia on 10/13/2010

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