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12/8/2013 3:48:24 PM Gabe Shelly Posts: 95	In Nature there is no room for feeling— No room for Love, Sadness, or human Pity, Only the Pain if you are alive and the Darkness if you are dead… Therefore a ‘Hero’ has no room 12/6/'13 edited by Gabe on 12/8/2013
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12/18/2013 3:56:47 PM Just That Archaic Poet Posts: 89	Gabe, even though I'm a terrible judge at your form of poetry, I must say you always enchant me, even if I don't exactly know or understand what you are saying. You manage to pack a lot of punch in such short verses. I always enjoy reading your work; you are one talented fellow. This was a cool read
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12/19/2013 9:46:57 PM Gabe Shelly Posts: 95	Thanks. I appreciate your criticism-- whatever it may be. Merry Christmas.
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