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11/17/2013 9:38:34 PM

Gabe Shelly
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'Tis in the air...

Can you feel it.

The time is near, can you hear it?

Jing-jing jingleling, ting-ting tingleling

The winds are calling, the leaves are falling--

That old man...can you hear him?

He's in every child's eye with sugar plum faeries dancing in their dreams.

It's that time of year again... Are there goosebumps on your skin?

Can you sing those hymns--

For now is the season,

So buck up that chin and break-out that grin

A New Year is almost here,

Think-not what could have been,

The time is to begin-again







'Tis in the air

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