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7/19/2010 11:27:15 AM Virginia Mitchell Posts: 2	An allotted announcement; Ben’s brother balances Carefully, carrying containers Designated “Dogma Delivery.” Eventually, everyone Finds frog-gy feelings for Generously generated Hair-raising hijinks. Incoherent ideas incur. Jeremiah jumps, jolting, Kicking kleptomaniacs, Lashing lawlessness. Money monkeys make Notorious nincompoops. Obscure obligations often Poisons pathetic passion! Quarantining qualified Representatives, Shrivels support, Transforming truth- Unilaterally, unfairly Vexing vicariously. While we want Xanadu, Yokels yield Zion’s zenith
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11/29/2010 5:44:01 AM Sebastian Valmont Posts: 2	I must say, that's a very clever alliterative abecedarian poem! Great use of imagery that flows from beginning to end, with an interesting theme that avoids sounding like nonsense. Which is difficult for abecedarian poems to not do. Impressive.
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11/30/2010 10:01:57 AM James Tate Posts: 4	imrosie wrote: An allotted announcement; Ben’s brother balances Carefully, carrying containers Designated “Dogma Delivery.” Eventually, everyone Finds frog-gy feelings for Generously generated Hair-raising hijinks. Incoherent ideas incur. Jeremiah jumps, jolting, Kicking kleptomaniacs, Lashing lawlessness. Money monkeys make Notorious nincompoops. Obscure obligations often Poisons pathetic passion! Quarantining qualified Representatives, Shrivels support, Transforming truth- Unilaterally, unfairly Vexing vicariously. While we want Xanadu, Yokels yield Zion’s zenith
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11/30/2010 10:22:44 AM James Tate Posts: 4	Wow! Improsie, your abecedarian worked welll for you. I couldn't find your word Xanadu in my two old dictionaries, so I looked it up on line and found it to mean a place of great beauty, luxury and contentment. So I benefitted both by the good poem and learning a new word. Thanks. James
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12/29/2010 3:52:10 PM Eiken Laan Posts: 10	Wonderful poem, I love it.
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