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11/7/2013 7:11:24 AM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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It's the what the hell mood
For the next 180 seconds,
You got a shitty attitude
Not gonna mess around with anyone
Don't want to be hit up by any bums
You want to live your life in peace
Assemble so your mind can be at ease
When it's done, you'll feel foolish
Wisdom and common sense were out thedoor
You were a minute away from hitting thefloor
But why?
Why, why, why
Let yourself be so angry. '
Collect yourself and pick some daisies
Flip this and fix it
Otherwise when the important momentcomes
You're gonna miss it.
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