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10/19/2013 8:27:51 PM
Jose Rodriguez
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WHY!?
Why do the many "Great United Nations"
of the world;
Suffer from underfunded education,
while taxing with frivolous expectations,
researching into lab based creations?
Enact vast unjustifiable laws,
endorsed by a corporate cause,
to eliminate and perfect human flaws?
Have men, women, and children on the streets,
enduring poverty and self defeat,
hungrily watching the upper class eat?
Support political and business corruption,
profiteering from the production,
of environmental and human destruction?
For we, the people of these many nations,
have allowed ourselves to be victims by
not taking a stand, hand in hand. Let us
unite as a race and break through their
grand lies, by first asking ourselves...
"WHY!?"
-Anonymously youRs-
(Copyrighted to "DigitallyDefectiveArt")
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10/20/2013 8:28:35 AM
Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
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Good work Jose, I like what your topic is about, something truly needs to be done.
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1/6/2014 7:42:51 AM
Karen Ruff
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You've made an excellent point. We are losing the country to glutton elitist movement that couldn't care less about freedom for the people.
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