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7/10/2010 3:00:34 PM
James Kendrick Posts: 1
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You mirror the sacred corpse, with a soul of purest moonglow, turn my disease to dust, as i crumble into the watching night, I fall upwards out of my dreaming lifemare to drink the poison of your sweet kiss and fade into the sun to be reborn among the souls
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