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8/31/2013 6:44:37 PM

eve wright
Posts: 4
Make fire,
Be burnt.

Don't live in darkness.

Love and be spurned,
Battle scars earned.

Don't be beige.

Kick, scream and fight,
And set things alight,
Hold on to your ground,
Summon your might;

The concept's profound,
And I know that they're right...

Yet somehow I long
for quiet.
edited by evieb on 8/31/2013
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