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8/30/2013 4:35:42 PM
scott thirtyseven Posts: 13
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WHERE THE CITY FOLK LIVE
At the confluence of the cultures Where the politics ebb and flow The tide of humanity crashes Against their collective soul
The spires of religions And posters of beliefs Crush against each other Through the weave of city streets
Registered colours of commerce And trade mark tags of youth Line the valleys of glass and steel On floor, wall, and roof
The constant clangs of progress Idle growls of restricted motion Drift across the green spaces Invading every moment
The scent of communal sweat Wafts upon the breeze From the fires of exotic dishes And the fumes of commercial needs
Feel free to swim the city Frolic in the human flow But be aware of the waves that break Against your precious soul edited by scott 37 on 8/30/2013
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