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7/15/2013 1:15:40 PM
Benjamin Larson
Posts: 4
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I was floating,
only now I'm sinking, Now I'm only sinking, my past drags me,
deeper and deeper into the abyss.
I never drown, the cold water in my lungs never stops the heartbeat,
I just sink.
Never dieing, never slowing.
For the dankness can not kill me,
and cool water can not end my descent,
It can only make me colder.
It can only drag me deeper.
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