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6/25/2013 2:52:42 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Used to worry about polluting the air, Now it's food, Gotta read labels, Those scientific fourteen letteringredient(s) Might do crazy things to your hair!
Look up and down isles, My stomach feels out of place All I'm looking for is real food Seems most the world and I don't workat the same pace
If I'm getting attacked my an asteroid, Maybe Top Ramen Maybe Oreos Maybe McDonald’s Maybe, just maybe Spaghettios But everyday? My body would bedestroyed!
That motor oil belongs in your car Not in fruit or a TV. Dinner Because the gov paid a farm!
It's become machines and chemicals Vs The human race People, come on! We need to kick it up a notch I know there's humans with good taste Please don't make food Where chemicals and flour becomeinterlaced!
The human race made these factors Mother nature doesn't need to botherscaring us with her disasters We'll wipe ourselves out or go to Mars Too bad I'm not a fan of those candyBars Those would do me just right If I'm stuck in a basement While an asteroid hits and tries toburn us out of sight. edited by svlynn18 on 6/25/2013
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