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6/15/2013 10:00:24 PM
Gabe Shelly
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I said more to her then "than in all our life together"--
She just whimpered and moved her head a little,
Then she was gone.
We didn't say anything...
"A pure change happened"
My Daughter
"Heaney"
6/15/'13
edited by Gabe on 6/16/2013
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