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5/27/2013 3:52:34 AM
Nato Calubiran Posts: 23
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Drips down my head Looking at the sky Bright and red
Slow and just still Here waiting And so I will
Falling on the asphalt Drip, drip, drip Slowly tearing my heart
Mother nature I'm torn and crying Don't leave me asunder
May 27,2013 Rain, rain, rain Contest Entry.
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