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5/24/2013 7:38:35 PM Gabe Shelly Posts: 95	What is this, What is this-- A Barrier to me!? Why, something so silly-- Don't you know Living is a Tease, Life is pain I am the Ease. My message is one of release-- Don't you know... Wherever I go, You will follow Death is knocking at my door 5/24/'13 (For all those who lost their lives in the tornado in Oklahoma City, I pray their end was quick.)
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5/29/2013 9:45:37 PM nikhileswari swaminathan Posts: 1	well dear i agree for it is a very painful condition to watch them die sec by sec
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6/1/2013 6:20:44 PM Reason A. Poteet Posts: 9	Death has no Barriers! a common theme. You personify death quite well as the deceiver that he is.
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