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5/22/2013 7:53:30 PM
Gabe Shelly
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We all think we're more than the score
And we carry that thought to the core.
That we are individuals and deserve the best above all the rest.
When really here we all are veneer--
A superficial glue of material that binds the inferior
To their exterior
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8/13/2013 5:24:11 PM
scott thirtyseven
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veneer, binding inferior to exterior, nice.
Oh and thanks for the Robert Frost that I've read today.
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