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5/20/2013 2:27:18 AM
Nato Calubiran Posts: 23
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Do remember me Hope tangled on a string Love isn't a thing Arrogance
Like a fallen tree Branches and twigs wither The whole body suffers Pestilence
Love is full of lies Full of hatred and despise Bringing people demise Entropy
I keep on waiting For the tree to bear fruit For the fruit to ripen This patience
I love you so much My reason for breathing The reason I'm living Mannequin
This is my entry for the contest Melancholy Memory
Pls. leave a comment after reading. :3 edited by Yamawaro on 5/20/2013
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